A Silent Vow

Posted: Tuesday, November 13, 2012 by Kratik in Labels: ,
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A shallow lie,
A deep impression.
Nothing said,
A silent vow.

A bruised chin,
A raging emotion.
Nothing said,
A silent vow.

A broken dream,
An injured heart.
Nothing said,
A silent vow.

A deep breath,
A gentle smile.
Nothing said,
A silent vow.

A simple move on,
An effort too hard.
Nothing said,
A silent vow.

A step towards greatness,
A written farce.
Nothing said,
A silent vow.

A dream achieved,
Manchester United.
Enough said,
All needed was a silent vow.

Jai Gurudev :)
Love,
Kratik

17 comments:

  1. Mohit says:
    November 13, 2012 at 7:33 PM

    Good write.. Best part was inclusion of Manu :) ..

  1. Unknown says:
    November 13, 2012 at 7:36 PM

    full of power!

  1. vivek says:
    November 13, 2012 at 8:08 PM

    Very simple and yet very subtle... powerful use of words

  1. Unknown says:
    November 13, 2012 at 9:54 PM

    'nothing said' but a lot 'conveyed' through this poem.. :) it signifies strength & determination :)

  1. Unknown says:
    November 14, 2012 at 6:40 AM

    well said .....a silent vow it is, always ! :D

  1. Unknown says:
    November 14, 2012 at 7:19 AM

    Well you are asking for a review from a Chelsea Fan :P

    Here it goes -

    Poem is laconic, nicely presented. It gives a pleasure to read. You involve football; that is great, but I do not understand how does it fit in the context, especially Manu.

    According to me there are two parts of this poem; one feeling disappointed and hurt. Next, a simple move, a dream achieved, Manchester united. . . cannot get what is being conveyed over here!

    A Disappointing revelation to a very passionate start.

    The way of representing things is laudable!

    Kudos :)

  1. Unknown says:
    November 14, 2012 at 10:08 AM

    Nice one!!! Manchester United...tht was good!!!

  1. Sourav Choudhary says:
    November 14, 2012 at 10:08 AM

    The fact that all our little worries that we face in our life is nothing compared to the joy that we get in supporting the greatest club in the world, Manchester United! :)

    Jai Gurudev

  1. Rahul Babtiwale says:
    November 14, 2012 at 10:31 AM

    nice usage of words dude. Thoughtfuly written

  1. Rahul Babtiwale says:
    November 14, 2012 at 10:34 AM

    nicely presented dude. Good usage of words

  1. Unknown says:
    November 15, 2012 at 10:46 AM

    Simply awesome...!!!

  1. Unknown says:
    November 15, 2012 at 10:48 AM

    Simply awesome...!!!

  1. Unknown says:
    November 15, 2012 at 10:48 AM

    Simply awesome..!!

  1. Unknown says:
    November 15, 2012 at 10:50 AM

    Simply awesome..!!

  1. Hemul says:
    November 16, 2012 at 3:30 AM

    'nothing said' but still conveyed everything :)
    awesome use of words :)
    JGD :)
    Stay Happy n Stay Blessed :)

  1. Unknown says:
    December 13, 2012 at 4:27 AM

    a poem read,
    nothing said
    a simple wow

  1. Kratik says:
    February 8, 2013 at 10:15 AM

    The poem was not about Manchester United. hahaha

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